Talk:Drinking water out of a billboard

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Hey Syree,

Before reading your text I would like to know first why you chose this project, to higlight to the readers what is important or intereseting about it. When reading this text it would be nice if you started with a caption above the information instead of directly in front of the first sentence. The caption for the first segment is called The reason for this project I think the segment underneath the caption solution for a problem would fall underneath it as well. In the second segment you explain very well what the problem is for the people of Bumuja. Do you agree with this?