Talk:Ecologies

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INTRO All the theories we have explored have to do with a sustainable way of life. '> more accurate with a sustainable way of making art / design (life is much more broad..)?? > Your first sentence is very much "met de deur in huis vallen" - Can you give your audience a bit of a hand? Something like: Being confronted with news about climate change daiuly, we as a group of engaged art & design students researched different strategies artists and designers use to deal with this. --Iris Schutten (talk) 13:26, 16 October 2020 (CEST) Therefore we named this article that way. > leave this sentence out? There are also many overlaps in the theories that have to do with taking inspiration from nature. > leave "also" out Such as in the Cradle to Cradle theory and Biomimicry. There are some downsides to the theories as well, which we will explain in the reflection. By: Loes Platenkamp, Lysbeth van der zee, Ilona Mrgole, Anna Shumeeva, Morris de Moor, Katja Heuveling